The Best Coach Ever
Tec Balam Esmeralda has
always had good mentors and coaches which are either teachers,former members or
people interested in our project. Nevertheless this season we have had some
issues with our school and most of them left the team temporally because of
this, time and work problems. Fortunately we still have one coach and we can
say he is the best one we could have wished for in our current situation.
His
name is Luis Valencia he is studying Engineering in Digital Systems and
Robotics in ITESM CEM at the moment and is a former member of Tec Balam as
well. To us, he has been our hero since has brought up the team in our hardest
moments and when we thought we wouldn’t be able to continue because of our lack
of mentors, it’s been more than once that he has saved us and has been helping
us in our way through the competition. He may not have as much academic
background due to his age as many other mentors from other teams, but he has
learned by experience more than many people have learned in books and he is
always learning new things to teach us or looking for people who may help us in
whatever he might not have much experience.
Being proactive is one
of his main teachings and we have learned from his love to technology and his
work as our coach. Luis inspires us to keep going on even if we feel like
giving up because he is a great example of persistence and hard work. It is
surprising the way in which he is compromised with the team and how he is
always able to find time for us besides studying in university and having much
more work than us. He is a real role model for us because he is able to carry
with the responsibility of leading a team all on his own and he is a real
leader who we can always look up to and count on.
We are thankful very much
that he is not the kind of person who does things for the team, and instead he
shows us how to do them. At the same time he never imposes ideas; he always
listens to our opinions, takes them into account and encourages us to think for
alternatives that work in every single way.
Team work is not always easy but
Luis helps us find our own way to work efficiently in harmony and he is one of
the, main reasons that we are such a united team which comes together in the
best and the worst times helping each other as a family. We have no words to
describe how grateful we are with Luis for all his work and commitment with us,
without him we would not be the great team we are today and continue enjoying
the pleasure of working with technology and learning from it.
Great job! I think that you've found your written voice. Great paragraph structure, there are a couple of run on sentences. Keep up the good work!
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